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I.

Snow, in winter.

II.

This morning the sun.
Yesterday rain.
Last night, rain.

III.

The flowers again in spring.
Soon the birds.

IV.

The dog, a bone.
The ducks about in the water.
The box, upstairs.

V.

Wellington.
Napoleon.
Napoleon by Wellington.

VI.

The children in the fields.
Sticks for mother.
In the middle of the street, an old man.
(The sparrows their morning bath.)
He, his coat and out into the darkness.

VII.

The enemy across the narrow stream, the boy.
Day, as we home the wounded soldier.

VIII.

Through the flames, the gallant fireman and the frightened horses.
Distinctly the horn of the hunter.
The moon over the still waters of the lake.

IX.

I, the postman.
Me, a letter.
We, the garden and the fence.

X.

To the boy's assistance, you, your lessons.
Cabbages in the garden.
The withered leaves blown about by the wind.
The sun through the window when.

XI.

The miser.
His gold.
You.
Your bicycle.
Very smart.
Near the bank where John went into the river.

XII.

About your proposal.
The message along the wires.

XIII.

Me, on that chair all day.
The sheep, to new pastures.
Work hard all day and now to bed.
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Exercise 32by 22thorn

In 13 parts.

Thanks to :iconkatdiestel: for a small, but, nonetheless, important revision.
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Exercise 32 by 22thorn is quiet but its many messages will catch you off guard; the suggester rightly calls it "strangely evocative". ( Suggested by Athalour and Featured by ShadowedAcolyte )
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Yatsukisamada Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this, it seem so little yet it hides more than words can hold.
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22thorn Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014
Thank you for the :+fav: and especially for your nice comment, Michelle. :huggle:
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Atheshya Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I really like the effect.
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22thorn Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
Thank you.
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goodtigerclaw Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014
wtf is this o.0
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
I’m very happy for you!!! :iconloveloveplz: :tighthug:
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22thorn Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
Thank you very much.
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconflyingheartsplz::iconsweethugplz::iconflyingheartsplz:
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nice
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22thorn Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
Thank you.
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